Thursday, February 28, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 26 - Concealed Carry

I think adults should be able to  carry a concealed handgun. For example, wherever you go you should always feel safe even if that means you have to carry a concealed handgun. In addition, Yes some adults established the right to have a gun and go through all the process. Also, People justify that they only use handguns for when you're in danger. In conclusion, People justify that they only use handguns for when you're in danger. These are the reasons i think adults should be able to carry a concealed handgun.

1 comment:

  1. This paragraph is really repetitive. Work on adding specific facts and examples instead of just repeating your opinion.

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