JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 31 - Vandalism
Parents should be responsible for their child's damage. For example, a parent should always be responsible for their child’s specific damage for anything. In addition, they should have done a better way in raising them. Also, the parents should have had their eyes on their kids and should have watched them more. In conclusion, students shouldn't be behaving in a bad manor but a parent should always be responsible for a child's damage.
Patricia, work on providing reasons that are more like the concrete details we use in essays. Keep improving!
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